Arda

I didn't stop to remember that my charecter was a hobbit but I would have a custom halbred made

That would be messy.

Anyways, I think everyone has givin there Character's story now. If you have any changes post it on here. For example, Orthies teachers were Tulkas and Yavanna. And he dose not dance ever.

Nope. read this. Gandalf is the wisest of the Maiar. He was known as Olórin, who sometimes dwelt in the gardens of Irmo and was the pupil of Nienna, who taught him wisdom and pity, and of Manwë and Varda. When the Valar decided to send the order of the Wizards (also known as the Istari) to Middle-earth, Olórin was proposed by Manwë and Varda, in order to counsel and assist all those in Middle-earth who opposed the Dark Lord Sauron.

P.S. I changed my character again. Orthies was the aprentice of Tulkas and Nienna. Because I want him to have the same type of wisdome that Gandalf has. So ya Orthies teachers are Tulkas and Nienna. But Orthies still was good friends with Yavanna and still learned alot from her!

-- Edited by Olorin on Sunday 18th of July 2010 02:55:21 PM

I know that. I did not say I was Manwes. I am his aprentice and he is my teacher. I think I am correct.

Thank you. And ya, it is weried how the Maiar belong to some Valar lol.

It is kinda like they are there children.

Yep they are all Gods, Ainur.

yes that would make sense

Does anyone have any comments on my character. How do you think I could improve it?

I added a sentence to my character's story.

Iluvatar wrote:

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"I will be cast into the void in this coming battle" (he was talking about the climax of the War of Jewels).  "You must help me and deceive my lieutenant Sauron into making a ring of power.  A ring that will rule the fate of Middle Earth.  You must take some of my power."

I was amazed that he would make that sacrifice.

He then gave some of his soul and power to me.

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The bold text is what I added.

 

What I'm thinking is that I'll just add a whole bunch of sentences like that and pretty soon the story will be huge!

I have already created the actual story and I'm pretty sure that it's original.

Oh yeah, I get it.

Let's just post when we update our characters. Agreed?

We should make a resolution to update our characters every time we get on! Just so we don't just leave this topic here untouched.

-- Edited by Iluvatar on Friday 23rd of July 2010 09:12:57 PM

Which thing that I'm trying to say? That we should update our characters or that I updated my character?

Haha. I forgot how I updated it.

Nope. Haha.

Sorry you should have edited your other post, you have broken the rules. And I have changed my character as well. Orthies now has the Palantir from Osgiliath. It is a white Palantir. And when the kin-strife took place he saved it from the fire, because he was there.

-- Edited by Olorin on Saturday 7th of August 2010 11:05:45 AM

Sounds good Illuvatar. And I gave this topic 5 stars even though it is my own. I thought it was a pretty good one so... ya.

here is some more sir cody he fought in the battle of bywater and he was the one to shoot wormtounge

Yeah that is true, and by the way you should edit your post. On the top right corner of your post just click "More" then click "Edit Post" and edit it.